Grant proposal

First, I have some great news:  next meeting, March, a prospective member is coming and she is bringing her massage chair!  So well have a "Picture, story and a massage" meeting.

 

OK, I have a rough draft.  Please help.  Read it over.  Please be critical - if you don't like the way it's worded, if it seems unclear, if it seems repetitious, let me know.  Suggestions are welcome.  Pay special attention to areas that are in bold, I have questions about them - I'm not sure of the name of the building or how often we have play groups or I just didn't like the wording so am looking for suggestions.

 

I have a few specific questions:

Roxanne - Who should I list as the contact? 

 

Who do I list as administering the grant?  Would it be the board?

 

Sistina & Shantel - Do you have an approximate cost of the picnic we catered?  And what would it cost to that to kick it up another notch - magician or some type of children's entertainment?

 

I know we are pushing to meet a deadline.  I'd like to get a first copy to Cory by Tuesday, so if you could get your comments back to me by 8:00pm on Monday - yes, today if you are reading this when it's light outside - I'd appreciate it.  Lori's husband, will be reviewing it for us once we get a final draft, so we need to give him some time to look it over. 

 

Thanks for your input.

Pam